In the distant lovely sky
Shining bright upon me...
Lighting my darkest hours of night...
Nights when I have no one around...
When loneliness arrive
I can always trust on you...
To make the dark go by
We laugh... we talk...
We cry together...
As no one else around
You have always been my star...
My star you'll always be...
On days when stormy clouds arise
To take away your light...
I still have hope you'll come shine through...
You'll always be my friend...
Hipo.....
7 comments:
It's a story.
A bitter one,indeed!
So amazingly is written !
You can view the heart,the heart of sighs and sorrows !
How cold this night is !
An unfulfilled dream !...a wish !
Fire place….charcoal… and that safe,cosy room…
How visual !
Even I can see the sparkle of fire flames in your wet eyes…
Yes…it's for real !
We should dig the ashes of the past !
Simply touching.
......Good poem Hippo
Thank you Dil for the lovely encouraging comment.... Makes me wanna write more... I still talk to this star.. Lol...
This is a poem of every soul...... Very well written.....
We all have unfulfilled desires...... We all live by them..... But in reality it is different.... That is how life is...... I feel it is due to human nature.... As humans we tend to think of what we dont have rather than get satisfied with what we got....
Keep writing Hipo..... U are very good and artistic...... Never thought you are this skilled in writing....
@Anonymous
Thanks. :D Well I'm a very dynamic person. So there can be many things no one has seen in me :D lol. Thanks again for the lovely comment.
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hek hek
Hey D
you do have talent.
keep it up.
Hey Thanks for both comments :) very encouraging :P he he...
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